glazed

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    glazed

    you come onto me
    as a passion fruit
    with a cranberry twist
    you discover I am cautious
    and I think you have fun with it
    you make me feel like
    I am filling my jelly jars
    in some forbidden place
    but oh my my
    you're such good taste
    I am a swirling translucent
    brewing to the top
    your sugar makes me high
    you are the cream
    of my crop

    I like wearing your butters
    I like sharing with you...mine
    I never knew such bliss
    when we kiss
    intertwined
    you make my heart trickle
    you make my face redden...on down
    I get lost in your flavors
    as we flow
    in each other now

    you offer me
    a sweet as honey dance
    and it's so sticky good
    I'll be the fly in your trap
    that wouldn't leave if I could
    you show me the colors
    of your own sensual wheel
    but oh my my
    what a sexy appeal
    I am quite glazed
    by what it is you are
    as fast as you lay your crumbs
    I am right behind you
    eating them all up

    I like wearing your butters
    I like sharing with you...mine
    I never knew such bliss
    when we kiss
    intertwined
    you make my heart trickle
    you make my face redden...on down
    I get lost in your flavors
    as we flow
    in each other now

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    passionsdance commented on glazed

    06-22-2009

    Of all your work this is the one I liked the most . Well, of all your work my tired eyes have been able to read . I like the passion and metaphore in this . You write very well .

    poeticdimension commented on glazed

    03-02-2009

    Delightful-a mixture of hunger and passion!!!

    WordSlinger commented on glazed

    02-09-2009

    I am right behind you eating them all up , thats great

    xxlheart commented on glazed

    01-30-2009

    a very nicely done love poem. has some passion mixed in and it is very sensual too. excellent write!!

    Vincent commented on glazed

    01-19-2009

    (GP) slippery sweet, Yum, Yum, lots goodies to eat, I ate it, I ate it all, I gobbled it up and left none a t'all. smiles Vincent

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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