Glorious, Wonderful....


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Simply contemplating the value of a certain relationship I have with a very dear, intelligent and Godly person...

Glorious, Wonderful....

Just as you have extended
Your open arms to me…

I invite you into my legacy
     No one knows why
And it is never to be told
And no one will ever know you 
           As I do
You will remain
One of the captors of my heart
Despite my resistance
Your influence doth depart

From Him into you it flows into me
And from Him into me I flow into you. 

Glorious, wondrous God that you are


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devaamido commented on Glorious, Wonderful....


"... He & I flow into you"??... and... "God Who is in Us". "He" alone can't be God unless you are too, or God includes you or transcends both. Excellent poem despite my quibble.



I see what you are does need tweeking - thanks!

ginga commented on Glorious, Wonderful....


jean, I love the uplifting aura that surrounds each carefully chose word. Your joy shines through. ginga



Thank you for taking time to read.

dahlusion commented on Glorious, Wonderful....


Oh, God, oh, yes, yes! A poetic pearl in all of its brilliance. Bravo!!



merely a reflection of what surrounds me : )

jeanpnkldyg commented on Glorious, Wonderful....


Tried to edit - post submission. I should have said: 'From Him into you He (not it) flows into me.......hope you get the intent.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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Day Is Done 6
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Untitled Conversation 4
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Still Waters 7
The Soldiers Prayer 4
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