God and Life!

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    God and Life!

    I am the oldest you know!
    Of eight children full of woe.


    Its not easy being me,
    They are always looking at me
    My sisters my brothers my Sons,my friends
    They all want something I can not mend


    Their heart hurts and I can't help
    I try I try but with no avail
    Every time I seem to fail.


    They are longing for my advice
    I can even be so wise
    Sometimes I think I know
    All about their wow.


    But sometimes I know nothing
    I know they hurt, and so do I
    So I pray and pray and look up at the Sky


    I am hoping to see
    This God of mine that made me.
    Where are you God? please give me a sign,
    And let me know that your love is mine.


    I lay here with tears in my heart,
    Why God are we apart?
    Tell me something my Lord to me,
    Where am I supposed to be?

    Am I on the right road?
    or am I just another lost soul?


    I look for you in every flower,
    and up at the sky while I pray,
    Can you please come my way.


    God can you hear my Cry?
    can you just pop your head up in the sky?


    So I know you can see me
    and hear my plead for you,
    I love you God even though I cant see,
    please give me a sign just for me.

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    RPT40 commented on God and Life!

    02-05-2010

    You have written an excellent poem, filled with great questions of life, and a very clear look at the inner struggles and worries shared by many. 10 from me

    countrypoet commented on God and Life!

    01-03-2010

    In this very powerful poem filled with strong emotion you have expressed a feeling that I think most people can relate to.At times we all feel discouraged in life but need to realize that God loves us all very much and as a loving father will provide the strength and guidance we need in life even before we ask for it.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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