god?

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    god?

    god?
    i dont know what you want from me
    you gave me a life to live it
    to mess up to beg for forgiveness
    to love and get my heartbroken
    to give and recieve
    to lie and learn
    to be born and be alone
    to know everyone hurts sometime in life but
    ...........god , why did you give me this pain to love and be loved by others that just dont care?

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    SweetSatin commented on god?

    10-25-2009

    Wonderful emotional spillage! Find your happiness and commit to you! Trust me it works

    WordSlinger commented on god?

    04-01-2009

    Nice poem, I like this line you gave me a life to live it to mess up to beg for forgiveness Nice beat to it, I gave it a 9 You have to find the right one

    shawndye commented on god?

    03-06-2009

    my thoughts were finally put into words by you!!!!

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