God’s View

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    God’s View

    Gleaming from up high

    Looking down upon the

    Ants scurrying around

    Searching for their

    Next meal

    As seen through an

    Atmosphere

    Of a pillowing white

    Mass of delicious

    Cotton Candy.

    Food for the Gods

    To feast upon at

    Their leisure

    Set to the measure

    Of a God’s wrath

    Or her pleasure.

     

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    dahlusion commented on God’s View

    09-10-2009

    Beautiful in all of its poetic creation and fantasy. Your metering is right on again!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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