God's Mime

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    God's Mime

    You may write a masterpiece
    with words that are sublime;
    they will never equal
    God's words passed down through time.

    You may paint a masterpiece
    with colors that are sureal.
    The images are but shadows
    of all that God has built.

    You may write a masterpiece
    where music enchants the ear.
    Try as you may you cannot say
    nature's music is less revered.

    You may dance
    a fluid movement of enchantment
    to which all can see.
    But it is but a mimic
    of natures gracefull duality.

    We call ourselves artist
    creating works in time.
    But the masterpieces
    we create
    are subtle copies-
    to God we mime.

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    lucindaclaire commented on God's Mime

    12-03-2009

    hi blue, This work is genious, pure genious, and a pleasure to read. Keep on keepin' on.

    WordSlinger commented on God's Mime

    07-29-2009

    Hail, nice reality poem, this is great, I admire this one.

    Chi commented on God's Mime

    06-22-2009

    To create with in that which is the creator is the oracle of repetition in the 3 D realm of life. Life shape and form never changes but takes on many illusions to each person who views the canvas of life and when impressed leaves a creative impression just for their eyes only. I rated this one a 100 and a suggestion of copy writing this poem it is marketable. Look forward to reading more of you work and very much so enjoyed your poetry style. Chi.

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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