God's Mime

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    God's Mime

    You may write a masterpiece
    with words that are sublime;
    they will never equal
    God's words passed down through time.

    You may paint a masterpiece
    with colors that are sureal.
    The images are but shadows
    of all that God has built.

    You may write a masterpiece
    where music enchants the ear.
    Try as you may you cannot say
    nature's music is less revered.

    You may dance
    a fluid movement of enchantment
    to which all can see.
    But it is but a mimic
    of natures gracefull duality.

    We call ourselves artist
    creating works in time.
    But the masterpieces
    we create
    are subtle copies-
    to God we mime.

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    lucindaclaire commented on God's Mime

    12-03-2009

    hi blue, This work is genious, pure genious, and a pleasure to read. Keep on keepin' on.

    WordSlinger commented on God's Mime

    07-29-2009

    Hail, nice reality poem, this is great, I admire this one.

    Chi commented on God's Mime

    06-22-2009

    To create with in that which is the creator is the oracle of repetition in the 3 D realm of life. Life shape and form never changes but takes on many illusions to each person who views the canvas of life and when impressed leaves a creative impression just for their eyes only. I rated this one a 100 and a suggestion of copy writing this poem it is marketable. Look forward to reading more of you work and very much so enjoyed your poetry style. Chi.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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