Going Fishing


  • ladydraeko
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Going Fishing

Out on the water
Ripples surround me
Will that one be caught
The one whom can be mine
Sun blazing upon my back
Gurgles, splashes, waves
Will I find the one who's to be mine
Cast in the line
Quietly sitting, waiting
Splashes turn to struggle
Reel it in, capture it
Bring in the net
What do I find
Is it my treasure
Or is it not
It slips away
Under the water
Will I find mine today
Cast in the water again
Simply waiting
Always searching
Waiting for my treasure
In the vastness
Of the water
Take me fishing
All my days

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stiches commented on Going Fishing


very interesting its as if your at peace when fishing also a wondrous time of courotisy very cool.

peacepoet commented on Going Fishing


great imagery i feel like im there never lose hope it is the only thing that can keep you going on you will find your treasure it just might not be what you planned

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ladydraeko’s Poems (22)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Amigo Mio 6
Little Girl Lost 13
Going Fishing 3
Questions Abound 7
Dancing with Mommy 9
The First Birthday 8
True Love and sweet bitterness 19
To the sea 14
Dear Mommy 14
Choices 12
The Ocean 5
Who Am I? 12
Following Me... 5
Awake From Darkness 5
Infinite 19
The Dead of Night 12
Life quickly changes - The story continues - 3
The Search Complete 14
My Hidden Self 6
I love you 9
Darkness Emerges 8
Silent Serpent 21