Going Insane

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    Going Insane

    Darkness,
    surrounds me,
    why open my eyes,
    when I can't even see.

    I can feel the rush,
    of my bleeding heart,
    I'm bleeding inside,
    I'm falling apart.

    I can't take this life,
    I can't do it anymore,
    If I continue,
    I'll rot to the core.

    I slit my wrists,
    to rid the pain inside,
    but it just leaves scars,
    that I cant hide.

    As long as you're here,
    I'll feel this way,
    What is your problem?
    Why do I have to pay?

    I never was this person,
    all depressed and sad,
    I used to be happy,
    and who was always glad.

    But you drove me to a point,
    where life is a pain to live,
    I dont know what to do,
    I've got nothing left to give.

    But I'll force to live on,
    with darkness in my brain,
    with tears pouring out,
    I'm going insane.







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    1990lh commented on Going Insane

    09-08-2009

    wow i knew i love this poem just from the title it was great full of true emotions we all have been there hell im still there and plan on bulidinga house there in the land of the insane. lol u did a great job just have to try to hold on and see it through.:0)

    teasasue commented on Going Insane

    09-08-2009

    wow, that is some emotion, I have so been there my self and I would have never been able to put it in words like you did, be strong and this will get better it may take time and that is never an easy wait

    kochab commented on Going Insane

    09-08-2009

    well said. rhyming to the poem went very well and the feeling is strong as well.

    CasimirJash commented on Going Insane

    09-08-2009

    very nice poem, very well written, i like the rhyme of it.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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