Golden Ring

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    Golden Ring

    I sense the passion
    in our hearts is waning
    though we seal our love
    in a golden ring,
    the promise we made
    in gold engraved:
    "Always and Forever"
    Whose luster still remains
    But look on our feeling
    it's no longer reigning
    onyly a spectre of once
    so glamorous and grand
    blazin' as we passes
    on impressions
    were making,
    But now it is proven
    just as Frost say:
    "Nothing gold can stay!"

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    BadBadBear commented on Golden Ring

    12-15-2009

    A fine write depicting the ending to a once fire hot relationship.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Golden Ring

    10-06-2009

    This is a sad write and I sense a feeling of the writer reaching out for validation of some sort. I can only say that marriage is what you make it and the spark can be reignited and maintained if both lovers want it to remain. Good write.

    xntric commented on Golden Ring

    10-04-2009

    Wow so beautiful and sad. It is amazing how fast "true love" can fade.

    butterfly62463 commented on Golden Ring

    09-30-2009

    Excellent and understanding too.Love it.Keep up the excellent work, don't stop.

    knight4696 commented on Golden Ring

    09-30-2009

    Stellar - I liked this one. Although ... I think some of your others are better. This poem has great potential, but I felt a bit broken up at times and the flow could be better. Still a good Job though.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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