Gone I go now~

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Gone I go now~

Deafening silence echos into the room,
where chaos remains,
laid out like a martyrs tomb
I remove the chains.

The score is tie both sides win
still the soreness you keep within
night has caught you in its hold
I did warn you, you were told.

Gone I go now, finding life
there is no reason to bridge this strife
let it go and find your way
see the hope in another day.

Ours is gone, not meant to be
no held esteem,
through my eyes you can not see
and through yours I can not dream.

eLtrybe

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bklynrizz commented on Gone I go now~

09-29-2013

An eloquent way of capturing the destruction of stuborn pride thus causing life to fall apart. Your right, you both win. Well written, I liked its flow.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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