Gone is my Sunshine

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    Gone is my Sunshine

    You dug inside,
    Brushing my Heart
    And Caressing my Soul
    Sweeping past my Lips,
    Soothing my Mind,
    While Manifesting your Intentions
    With your Delicate Fingers


    Your Whisper finds my Ears
    Like a Calming Breeze O'er the Shore,
    Wandering down my Canal
    Calling to every Receptor,
    Dispatching a Wave Of Spazmic Horripilation
    across my Flesh,
    Only to leave me Hollow inside


    My body but a Shell
    of the Man I used to Be,
    Now you are gone
    This Truth I cannot see,
    You were my Sunshine
    But Night has come to Stay,
    I am Certain, We'll meet again Someday

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    Jes commented on Gone is my Sunshine

    11-24-2010

    Very nicely put. your flow is as always elegant.. U good
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    Savant commented on Gone is my Sunshine

    08-06-2010

    Very suggestive imagery. A beautiful love story. The best ones are the ones where love is lost and hope is gained. You mentioned being a hollow shell and it made me think of how they say you can hear the ocean in a shell...you can hear where that shell came from when it's hollow. i have lifted you up to me ear and I can hear where this piece came from. Good stuff.
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    kittman101 commented on Gone is my Sunshine

    07-10-2009

    i felt the lonliness comveyes within the words, of someone close that you are missing. But also acceptance knowing you will again meet one day.
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    Mandi commented on Gone is my Sunshine

    07-07-2009

    NNNOW that's poeetry not always sad not always happy llike real life excet I have to look up the big words
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    jmschwartz commented on Gone is my Sunshine

    07-06-2009

    beautiful. love the way it flows. makes me feel as if you let us in your heart and mind.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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