Gone
Gone by morning in the light,Gone by daytime burning bright.
No matter where you go, no matter what you do,
I will always be there for you.
Cry with tears of pain and sorrow,
you'll be gone again tomorrow.
Gone
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Tags: Lonelyness
- moonlitlove
- is happy that i can continue working.
Gone by daytime burning bright.
No matter where you go, no matter what you do,
I will always be there for you.
Cry with tears of pain and sorrow,
you'll be gone again tomorrow.
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AlySkull96 commented on Gone
06-06-2009
- That is really good. It maybe short but it explains alot of things. Like personal thoughts of one thing to another
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NoelleMileski commented on Gone
05-26-2009
- This is really nice. It's short but not missing anything. You get a good sense of what you were going for. Nice work.
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Bobcatmoon commented on Gone
05-24-2009
- nice peice of prose...leaves a reader wanting to see more of such style...a longing yet but sorrow interesting conflict of twist...
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Panaramicpoet commented on Gone
05-22-2009
- short . .but very sweet. I cant wait to her more, girl. Please keep up the nice work. always keep an open mind.
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onyxprince commented on Gone
05-22-2009
- I love this read. Somthing I will come back to often to ease my pain and sorry. Thank you so much for blessing everyone with this!
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