Gone.

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    Gone.

    Gone, Everything is gone.
    It was all amazaing, 100% amazing.
    then somthing came crashing it down, some thing told me it wasnt ment to be.
    But Why?
    What went wrong.
    Things always happen.
    Everyone always get in disagreements.
    Why couldnt we have just worked
    this one out like all the
    Thousand other times?
    Something was different about this time though,
    it did some major damage,
    the massive breaks that cant be fixed.
    That I said we fixed before but really,
    It was all fake.
    Its really no different from other times.
    Could it be though that it has happend alot?
    What ever it is. I wish i had the answer.
    because its all gone. Gone forever.
    It will never be back, never be the same.
    Is that a good thing? Or bad?

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    gregster commented on Gone.

    09-08-2010

    if i knew what was all....well all may be gone but it is not yet done...the day u stop trying is the day u actually fail...so get up and try again

    Starella15

    09/10/2010

    I am :) Thanks:)

    redbloodink commented on Gone.

    02-12-2010

    this write was good I enjoyed the reminder of how relationships can go wrong... and then can't go back to the way it was..... red

    Starella15

    02/12/2010

    thanks

    JudeDruid commented on Gone.

    02-12-2010

    noice very depressing tho :( LOL 8 for you :)))))))))))))))))))))

    Starella15

    02/12/2010

    lol thanks :DDDDD yeah but thats just how i was feeling

    Mareann commented on Gone.

    10-07-2009

    Wow, this is so sad, but a well written poem. It is very emotional, made me cry.

    Starella15

    10/07/2009

    yeah i was crying when I wrote it. Im sorry it mad you cry

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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