Good bye

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    Good bye

     Good bye
    *********

    I think that’s not the end of it

    Let’s say it is just anew start

    After forty we are not finished

    Only we need to tune our soul and mind

    Forget about the body

    Even after sixty

    We can manage to have a new bride

    ***

    The glass is not hundred percent empty

    Hope fully it is fifty fifty

    It depends how we look or how we understand

    ***

    Today to our dear friend we say farewell

    Tomorrow some body will say us good-bye

    As whenever there is welcome

    For sure there will be bye – bye

    ***

    At last let’s keep only the good memories

    The bad if any let’s through behind

    Cause nobody is perfect

    Except his majesty the almighty God

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    carynontherhine commented on Good bye

    11-09-2010

    Saying goodbye, yet as your beginning line that it is not the end of it but rather a new start. Your feelings come across so sincere, so realistic. Age means nothing when it comes to love. Those in their eighty's are still getting married. Love holds no restrictions at all. And in the future who knows what can happen. Loved the emotions in this write. You are very talented!! Ten plus from me!! Hugz

    StandingBear commented on Good bye

    03-02-2010

    An absolutely positive work you've created and shared with all. "At last let's keep only the good memories". Great write!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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