GOOD- BYE

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Divorce and rest the love life

GOOD- BYE


GOOD-BYE

I find each night gets worse
Will time please heal these wounds
All  I did was love and lose
How much pain can one consume

My thoughts go back to yesterdays
I'd brush his long brown hair
When I felt that we were one
Was I completely ignorantly unaware

I need to cry to say good-bye
Hear  answers from his voice
I have never told this man
"I'm giving you a choice"

He may have never loved me
Just needed me to care
When his world turned upside down
He knew that I'd be there

Far away from his nest
Many lonely nights
Both of us an easy target
We tried to make it right

I never meant to fall in love
Nor did I think I could
I never felt love this way
Nor ever think I would

Leaving me quite empty
With pain beyond belief
I never felt so alone
Death has brought less grief

When one dies he can't return
Although, he will be missed
I feel I've died and he's alive
What crazy shit is this

A never ending closure
He may come back again
To answer a few of my questions
If so,  I don't know when

I feel I'll never love again
"Time will heal all wounds"
I don't need another cliche'
I need an answer soon

By: Terri Lynn Waldrop-Vienneau 101
Witten on: March 20th 1999
Kaleidoscope's Ghetto 101

Well, It has now been 15 years ago since, I wrote this poem. No brain teaser here. I was in the middle of a divorce and I am pretty sure rebound relationships are not the better of relationships



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windsongs commented on GOOD- BYE

06-10-2014

no answers-and you know what they say about wait and wagons-smile live enjoy ur life :)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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