GOOD FRIENDS

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one of the ways some people deal with the pain of a broken heart. a story as old as time.

GOOD FRIENDS

after she left i hurt everyday
the pain she left wouldn't go away
then i met a couple that became my good friends
now thanks to them i'm happy again
thanks to you vicadine and jim beam
i get through the day without feeling a thing
i know i hurt but i don't feel the pain
thanks to you vicadine and jim beam

sometimes her memory sneeks up on me
when i'm noy looking knocks me to my knees
but thanks to a couple of my good friends
i bounce right back on my feet again
thanks to you vicadine and jim beam
i get through the day without feeling a thing
i know i hurt but i don't feel the pain
thanks to you vicadine and jim beam

i know my story has been told before
i'm not the first man to ever walk the floor
i'm sure there are better ways to get by
but i'm too far gone to even try
thanks to you vicadine and jim beam
i get through the day without feeling a thing
i know i hurt but i don't feel the pain
thanks to you vicadine and jim beam




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therejected commented on GOOD FRIENDS

10-10-2009

i didn't know we had the same friends. haha just kidding, good one though, i liked it

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