Good Night

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Good Night

Love's like
a starry night
last night
it was cloudy outside
that's life 
and I'm stuck inside
turn out the lights
I wanna see the skies
lost sight
open up the blinds
that's right
I wanna see all kinds
of lights
up in the sky
I close my eyes 
after so many tries
and find
a place to hide
and remind
myself I tried
to unwind
but I know I'm not fine
so I look to the skies
and see the sun rise
good night

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knight4696 commented on Good Night

02-06-2010

You certainly do have your own style - nice work.

Paradice21 commented on Good Night

12-07-2009

This was A very Nice poem! And One of my favs of yours!

Hathor4Wine commented on Good Night

12-02-2009

lol...so silly...*smiles*.....l............................................................-H4W

StandingBear commented on Good Night

12-01-2009

Nice, philosophical work uniquely written. Almost sounds like a date didn't show leading to this great write. Backup Plan B! Awesome!

devaamido commented on Good Night

12-01-2009

You sure do describe the classical "booze & broads done let me down", guitar pickin' experience better than most. It's good! Let's see the rest of your repertoire...10 for this one

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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