good over evil

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    Thanksgiving how does it related to the journey black take to be here,,what part of this is African,, or American,,what are we celebrating when we did not ask to be here,,what circumstances met us when we came,,what are we giving thanks for as blacks..

    good over evil

    god this is man

    yes you made me

    and here I am to exalt..

    complication of  my eyes,

    dream of salvation has be deny,

    and so I live in sin.continue to strive

    on my own,making ends meet,yes

    I am a giant,financially rotten rich,

    they say i am African American,you Asian

    American,so when do I became American,

    put up on us the will to thanksgiving a meal today

    and you can starve tomorrow,,pale face are American

    with no attachment of decline,to suggest to that evil.

    this land that we strive to dream about,and enhance freedom

    of the eyes and not mind,,but bob said long time ago,,

    until,you see me as you and my blackness is just human,

    and bear no significance  of my skin,first and second class citizen

    of any country is no more,,until that day,keep dreaming for peace and love,

    is just an illusion ,so her we stand good over evil,speaking the truth

    with open arms willing to die for the blackness that slave me

    into this land of good and evil, so if I came here in bangles strap to

    my feet and mouth  dry as parch desert sand,but i must give thanks for

    the ride,and struggle of leaving my family behind,taking the journey of a

    life time to say what,god is good,for making me different in shades.

    so here I stand rotten rich on capital hill and I am not about to shake

    for I know my self and the journey it take to be here,so is your dream

    related to me,or I have my own vibes of where I came from..you

    know what time it is,,and its not dinner time..

     

     

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    stefy commented on good over evil

    12-18-2010

    This is so honestly.....looks like confession.....i like the poem so much.....Go ahead man!!!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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