Goodbye my love,

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Goodbye my love,

Wake up sweetheart! Get a clue!
 
Can't you see i'm leaving you?
 
Slowly i drift, I fade into nothingness,
 
No longer my love, no longer my bliss.
 
The burdens you carry too much for
 
me to bear, 
 
I try to talk to you so often but you
 
could never hear.
 
I'm fading my love, I'm dying. Can't you
 
see?
 
I've waited for you, but i realize there's 
 
nothing here for me.
 
Oh how it hurts to leave this all behind,
 
Please don't try to talk me out of it, I've 
 
already made up my mind.
 
I've longed for the day you'd give me 
 
some time,
 
I've hoped for a second you'd see and
 
no longer be blind
 
How i wished for a moment you'd share  
 
your life with me,
 
But you remained bound, you refused 
 
to be free.
 
My love, I'm leaving you this day, no
 
longer in my heart,
 
Oh how you will be missed, it hurts but
 
I must part. 

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Goodbye my love,

05-30-2011

I really like this poem because it is how love goes so often. I think it is had to stay in a relationship that one feels unloved.

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Goodbye my love,

10-06-2010

Beautiful! I love the expression and the sadness and conviction behind the words. S

dahlusion commented on Goodbye my love,

10-05-2010

An honest ending to this deeply sad write. Peace and Light, dah

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