Goodbye

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Goodbye

Another day is looming,
I wonder if I'll feel,
The love that is beside me,
That yesterday, was real.

You were so sick,my darling,
Your pain,so hard to bare,
your eyes,once full of mischief,
is now just one long stare.

I will hold you, one last time,
With my arms around you tight,
My fingers caressing your soft fur,
My tears,distorting my sight.

Goodbye,my little Kelly,
Goodbye,my little friend,
I will say to God,and St Francis
Thank you,
For your dog,that to me you did
Lend.


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Rainz commented on Goodbye

04-25-2009

So touching

mrobb6488 commented on Goodbye

04-05-2009

I can completely understand the feeling...however I think that if you would have kept all the stanzas the same it could have worked out better for you. If you play with it some more I think that you could really make it work instead of sounding like you were just desperate to make the last line end in ryhme.

rose081900 commented on Goodbye

02-16-2009

so sweet.

magati commented on Goodbye

02-16-2009

like some said once we dont die but reborn again in different forms...life never ceases...i love the piece...

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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