goodbye

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  • dragongarcia
  • Losing everything I loved but trying to keep going

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a poem based on how i felt every time someone i loved died or left me

goodbye

once again left behind
with no hope in sight
everyone always leaves
never saying goodbye
but this time was diffrent
for i got the chance
yet the hurt is worse
then all the last
i sit here wanting to cry
angry at no one in particular
feeling so empty
always left alone
so cold inside
wanting the pain to end
before the next non goodbye
so i wait pretending
not to care
til the day its my turn
to pass on the hurt i feel

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

dragongarcia’s Poems (96)

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