Goodbye

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Goodbye

Creeping up the window pains of a left over thought

A glimmer of hope reaches for something that can not be caught

Thorns prick the skin straining to be free

Scratching at the window pains wishing it wasn’t me

The branches glide along the rails that keep the soul at bay

Tickling the entrance to a memory trying to break away

Pushing and pulling as the wind scrapes the glass

Shattering the breath that tastes like poisoned gas

 A piece of faith glides down the walls

Licking at the wounds from those thorny claws

Dripping faster as the rain cleans these eyes

Kissing my broken heart forever torn with goodbyes.  

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Qualin commented on Goodbye

03-27-2012

the peom captured me that i what I like one that makes you visualise the moment thoughts and heart feelings,a very good write....thanks

Qualin commented on Goodbye

03-22-2012

when a poem keeps you and makes you live the momet,you have accomplished your write...very good gal

ayyan commented on Goodbye

08-16-2011

good writing and this is very impressive of your vision. nice and wish you write more and more

jamie7121f

09/24/2011

Thank you :) I enjoyed writing it. I felt inspired that night. Best wishes J

hannahxP commented on Goodbye

08-14-2011

i love this its a great read and has a really nice flow and easy rhyme, =] great write!

jamie7121f

08/15/2011

Thank you : ) Glad you enjoyed it

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

jamie7121f’s Poems (20)

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Life's Path 2
Goodbye 4
Closing Doors 1
Merry Christmas M's 4
The Dream 7
Stars 9
Twlight 9
At The End 6
Pretty Perfect Memories 5
Swan Lake 8
Where to Begin 14
These Eyes 10
Rain Drops 13
Camp Fire 6
It's That Time 5
You Gave Me 4
Letter to My Bank 1
Mourning 6
A Broken Past 3
A Friendship Lost 6