Goodbye

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Goodbye

You wanted me to hate you
to do what you do,
telling lies and saying goodbyes
mixed with I love yous.

Telling me I was the one
who made all things right,
then like the wind
you took off in the night.

I did all I could do to keep
you by my side,
but you were bent on leaving
running tail to hide.

But I'm a stronger lady
then most may seem to care,
I will live my life for me
your no burden to bare.

I love myself too much
for this kind of pain,
I'm taking flight now
before I go insane.

take care my lovely angel
it was such a sweet ride,
but now I'm moving forward
it is me who will now hide.

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stellar commented on Goodbye

10-07-2009

I love the rhythm and rhyme of this poem...as also the genuine content...i think this poem is nice because it comes from a fermented experience and now turned into a sweet wine

mayo commented on Goodbye

08-08-2009

love has no boundies ,as you can see. what god has sent us , can also be set free. The love you thought you surely found has left you sad and forward bound. now you must go and find youre self , and let the love in you grow.

Speakwell commented on Goodbye

07-30-2009

That was truly a mind blaster....Usually poets write about things that happen with them or someone they know, what about you?

keanna25 commented on Goodbye

07-25-2009

Loved It, your poem wwas really good because i related to everything you said.

Ash212 commented on Goodbye

07-24-2009

Good Poem. It has alot of meaning but I'm positive it would mean so much more if you were to read it.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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