Goodbye

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Goodbye

You wanted me to hate you
to do what you do,
telling lies and saying goodbyes
mixed with I love yous.

Telling me I was the one
who made all things right,
then like the wind
you took off in the night.

I did all I could do to keep
you by my side,
but you were bent on leaving
running tail to hide.

But I'm a stronger lady
then most may seem to care,
I will live my life for me
your no burden to bare.

I love myself too much
for this kind of pain,
I'm taking flight now
before I go insane.

take care my lovely angel
it was such a sweet ride,
but now I'm moving forward
it is me who will now hide.

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stellar commented on Goodbye

10-07-2009

I love the rhythm and rhyme of this poem...as also the genuine content...i think this poem is nice because it comes from a fermented experience and now turned into a sweet wine

mayo commented on Goodbye

08-08-2009

love has no boundies ,as you can see. what god has sent us , can also be set free. The love you thought you surely found has left you sad and forward bound. now you must go and find youre self , and let the love in you grow.

Speakwell commented on Goodbye

07-30-2009

That was truly a mind blaster....Usually poets write about things that happen with them or someone they know, what about you?

keanna25 commented on Goodbye

07-25-2009

Loved It, your poem wwas really good because i related to everything you said.

Ash212 commented on Goodbye

07-24-2009

Good Poem. It has alot of meaning but I'm positive it would mean so much more if you were to read it.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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