goodnight, summer night


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i was standing on my deck above my backyard and the sun was fast disappearing into someone else's today. i am a little sad as i feel fall approaching but, i love fall, too. so it's a win, win thing :) this is just my send off poem to my favourite season.

goodnight, summer night


goodnight, summer night
goodnight to flips flops
and standing on rooftops to view your stars
goodnight, summer night
hello to warm sweaters
and love letters by the fire
goodnight, summer night
thanks for your life afoot and prior
and the wink you will throw me
when snow is above and below me
this winter.

sweet, sweet summer night


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combatrider commented on goodnight, summer night


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lol thank you :)

Tony5880 commented on goodnight, summer night


i live thiis poem and traveled this element we call time. hot days to cold ways when you see the snow falling on what you thought would be a sunny flight! hey when the cold winds tail and what you thought my be hail i guess the sunny days have gone a flight!



thank you so much ! most appreciated :)

cttgad commented on goodnight, summer night


I enjoyed this poem. Love that others look at things like that. A great read and wonderful visuals. Thanks



thank you so much for your time. sometimes i hope/wish that other people other than poets read poetry. i hope so. we/you have so much to share.



So true. I think that everyone loves poetry, just some more than others.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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