Goodnight

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Goodnight

    Tossing and turning in my sleep. Drowning in pools I breathe suffocating from sleep I seek. Empyness runs deep from the soles of my feet, to the flighty memories that still creep. An unsteady heart beat, the numbness consumes me. Frustation batters me, my knees give out... Thier through with me. My stomach churning my eyes are burning. To learn it was all in my dreams.. 

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Teardrops commented on Goodnight

06-19-2010

We walk through the same dream my friend . One day you will find your love Marie

ThatGurl

06/19/2010

I have thank you... I'm right here, I'm the only one I can count on.. Thanks for reading..

alb29oclfl commented on Goodnight

06-19-2010

I've had so many nights that could describe in part or whole, great write

ThatGurl

06/19/2010

Thank you...

Dano commented on Goodnight

04-22-2010

i like the way this flows together and each thought goes into the next... nicely written

ThatGurl

04/22/2010

Thank you...

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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