GOT FAITH?

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GOT FAITH?

Shadows provide the shade
Frayed and feeble give thanx
Sweat beads form river banks
Leading to firmament
Supplication to a damnful deity
Devours what's left of a faith

Harm the safe

As the faith starts to question
Rosary beads break
Creates perils for those who don't watch where they step

The bless is the curse
Switch meanings in reverse
The purpose search immersed
Into a baptism prison
Waiting for the flesh
Or until the hearts and minds have risen
Tension from the missionaries
Stressing salvation through religion
Cracked whips
Slave ships
Claiming it's god given
Yet somethings missing...

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Grito commented on GOT FAITH?

06-01-2009

The sound, the view the way things were, is how here now is written, but with the praise, in God we raise, perhaps as he is biden, the skys will clear, with sweet mana near, mayhaps the world has risen.

cynthiakehl commented on GOT FAITH?

06-01-2009

hear ya brother, them ships brought demise to my ancestors. their own religion is in turmoil, they're falling on their own beads ;) God gives to us what is needed, regardless of what another "man" preaches. nice job on this!

abbadejuju

06/01/2009

tank U luv tank u very much!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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