Grace

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    Grace

    He shows us love yet we still ignore him

    He saves our lives yet we don’t explore him

     

    What will it take until we obey

    Its simple belief and love his way

     

    He is the way the truth and the light

    Always ready to delight

     

    He fills our hearts and minds with joy

    He’s so much better than a toy

     

    When we accept to be reborn

    His grace and mercy he does adorn

     

    Before it’s too late and the earth is done

    Believe in Christ because he is the one

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    1Love commented on Grace

    07-30-2009

    I loved this poem. Excellent work!!! only 1 small error Our instead of Are. Otherwise very very nice.
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    tygseflrpdme commented on Grace

    07-30-2009

    Second line has a small error...our instaed of are. The frist stanza is not a rhyme, but an identity. The fourth stanza analogy is too timid. I like this poem. Shows honesty and clarity. Thank you.
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    MonkeyLover

    07/30/2009

    Thank you so much for catching the error. I didn't even realize it. I will fix it as soon as I can. Thank you for your critic you are obvious a real poet. I appreciate you reading my very amateur stuff.

    lonewolf commented on Grace

    07-29-2009

    another good one. love the very first line. that is so true.
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    MonkeyLover

    07/30/2009

    Thank you I appreciate the comments.

    1990lh commented on Grace

    07-29-2009

    I LOVE IT! Great poem i love the style , the flow, but most important i love the message of the poem. you really did a great job. cuz he is the one 10 from me
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    Lolee commented on Grace

    07-25-2009

    Very well put together, and you can tell you gave it a lot of thought. I wish everyone would get ready...there's a day a comin. Thanks again.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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