Grandmas Cooking

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    • LOVE HAS NO FACE, NO COLOR, AND NO SHAPE. LOVE IS WHEN TWO PEOPLES HEART COME TOGETHER AND BECOME ONE.

    Grandmas Cooking

     Grandmas cooking

    umm umm umm
    Grandmas cooking
    that is the best
    that well seasoned chicken
    I'm thankful for being so blessed

    umm umm umm
    grandmas cooking
    it is so so good
    nothing can go wrong
    glad I'm from the hood

    umm umm umm
    grandmas cooking
    the smell itself can stop a war
    dame grandmas cooking
    fuck that i want it all

    um um ummmmm grandmas cooking
    sorry for the profanity
    but grandmas cooking
    got me forgetting were my manners be

    ummmm umm grandmas cooking
    with such a heavenly taste
    nothing taste better
    it gets its praise from even the saints

    ummm ummm ummm  Grandmas     Cooking

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    HopeOhlarik commented on Grandmas Cooking

    09-21-2010

    I know the feeling, my grandma's cooking is the same way. Good write.
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    frazel5 commented on Grandmas Cooking

    09-19-2010

    :) well done my friend. makes me think of my own grandma's cooking
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    am2anangel commented on Grandmas Cooking

    07-10-2010

    another great write one suggestion to help the flow in the 3rd stanza maybel I want it more instead of all to keep with the rhyme flow. One or two typos. But a great write and message none the less. well done.-tonya
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    1990lh commented on Grandmas Cooking

    07-09-2010

    haha love it man real nice write this gor me laughin
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    ginga commented on Grandmas Cooking

    07-08-2010

    phantom, You got me wanting some of theat Grandma's cooking just from reading about it. A fun and enjoyable read. ginga
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