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I don't have much desire to be contrived, but welcome your comments.


Grateful You opened the world to me

Challenged to know my destiny

Thankful for the words You spoke

That give foundation for all hope.


Grateful for the eloquence

With which the tales are told

E’er praying for the temperance

Your glory to behold


Turn the corner, cross the river

Choose this path rather than..

To know where is the giver

That leads to promised land


Who could know to design this life…

And orchestrate the masses

Who am I to be your wife?

And see through others glasses?


Consumed by Your mission

Infused by Your compassion

I will carry on

            I will carry on…

I will carry on.



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cliftondurant commented on Gratitude


a beautiful poem a lovely message thanks for sharing



Thank You for your kind words.

NevillePark commented on Gratitude


An attitude of gratitude! My former pastor preached a good sermon or two on that theme. "Who could know to design this life… And orchestrate the masses Who am I to be your wife? And see through others glasses?" What a scrumptious rhyme!!! It should be on a poster somewhere. To add to the comment from ianscott.You have acting talents I have no doubt- Drama is an important part of our lives.



Once again, I apologize for the late acknowledgement of your comment. I have been promised more hidden gems, but it seems I can't hold my breath as long as yourself, the water is still a bit murky here. I am humbled by your kind words.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

jeanpnkldyg’s Poems (51)

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Life's Pace 1
When Words Fail.... 1
For His Glory....a prose piece. 1
My 0
Just a thought... 1
I Pray 0
Sufficient Fear 1
Purposed to Love 0
Grace 0
Mother 0
Illegitimate Child 0
Word 0
Facebook Fetish 0
When the Ancients Love... 0
Going Home 0
Heaven is Waiting 2
Never Ending... 1
For J. C. P. (13y) 2
Fly Away 6
This Battle is .... (2) 7
Look Up.. 3
boredom 2
Angels 2
Christmas Musings 6
Letters, Artwork and Inspiration 4
The Vanished 8
What more to say... 6
For the Fall 5
Gratitude 3
Surfer Dude 26
Cave 16
Glorious, Wonderful.... 4
So far, Untitled 4
Love, Leave me alone 6
I saw your face 4
Request for Intercession 3
Until My Dying Day 11
No Glory Here 5
Day Is Done 6
Immersion of Self 4
Returning 4
My Children's Mother 6
Fortunate Circumstance 2
Sentiment for a Daughter 4
Untitled Conversation 4
Alone With God 6
Still Waters 7
The Soldiers Prayer 4
Slip Away From the Darkness 4