great light

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    • arpee
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    great light

    i'm on a train,
    slow moving to take away my pain.
    he says,'i'm in a limbo right now',
    getting to the light i don't know how.
    it's raining hard out here,
    so does my feelings i won't share.
    your father won't let you down son,
    like my father did to some.
    sometimes we have to do,
    what we had to do.
    we'll be together soon son,
    follow me and i lead you to the sun.
    between tears lies happiness,
    beyond darkness we will notice..
    great light! great light! great light!
    inside this tunnel that made us fright.

    arpee'05 

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    am2anangel commented on great light

    02-23-2011

    interesting write very visual and thought provoking. well done. -Tonya

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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