Greenhouse

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Greenhouse

steel shadows 
etched the route
passively draped across incandescent domain
fool's gold beneath a glass roof
murmuring along the cracks
glorified by echoes
jelly shrinking our periphary
taut, leaning -
shoulders inching toward flight.
Sharp, citrus burst 
to a vulture.
tetris blocks
driving honeycomb routine
Steel shadows 
etched the route,
Passively draped across an incandescent domain.
Fool's gold beneath a glass roof
murmuring along the cracks,
Glorified by echoes
Jelly shrinking our periphery
taut, leaning -
shoulders inching toward flight.
Sharp, citrus burst 
to a vulture.
Tetris blocks
Driving honeycomb routine.

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lorenzo commented on Greenhouse

05-06-2013

great writing, wonderfully cryptic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lasmuigh

05/06/2013

Thanks so much! I'm glad you thought so.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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