Greenhouse

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    Greenhouse
    steel shadows 
    etched the route
    passively draped across incandescent domain
    fool's gold beneath a glass roof
    murmuring along the cracks
    glorified by echoes
    jelly shrinking our periphary
    taut, leaning -
    shoulders inching toward flight.
    Sharp, citrus burst 
    to a vulture.
    tetris blocks
    driving honeycomb routine
    Steel shadows 
    etched the route,
    Passively draped across an incandescent domain.
    Fool's gold beneath a glass roof
    murmuring along the cracks,
    Glorified by echoes
    Jelly shrinking our periphery
    taut, leaning -
    shoulders inching toward flight.
    Sharp, citrus burst 
    to a vulture.
    Tetris blocks
    Driving honeycomb routine.

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    lorenzo commented on Greenhouse

    05-06-2013

    great writing, wonderfully cryptic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Lasmuigh

    05/06/2013

    Thanks so much! I'm glad you thought so.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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