Greif
If someone dies,
You are sad.
My grandmom died,
For I screamed.
I yelled,
And cried.
God has the say,
It is his way.
In life you want to live,
For something makes it.
I will and have had grief,
She is dead.
Greif
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Tags: Death
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12-19-2009
- Remember the golden rule of spelling....."I b4 E except after C", here u misspelled greif--it should be spelled grief...don't worry we all make that common mistake...I only mentioned it cuz I like your writing and encourage u to continue and spellcheck and grammarcheck along the way...I can see u becoming a good writer some day....and hope I get the first book...wink....Kudos
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Dancer022597 commented on Greif
06-10-2009
- That is so sweet! I can toally relate to this poem. It's start foward but can be viewed by different thoguths and ideas.
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