Grieved in the spirit

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    Grieved in the spirit
    You eat the fruit that was forbidden for thee.
    You kill your brothers, He whom you should keep.
    I have created a paradise, where life would only be.
    I placed you in the center, for you to be with me!

    You disobeyed, and your eyes were opened.
    Our relationship, once perfect, now is broken;
    so now you are blinded to my ways,
    from the dust whence thou came, it shall now be your grave.

    Life was never meant for you to be ashamed.
    Life was never meant for you to experience pain.
    Life was never meant for you to have any burdens.
    Only if you would look back, hear me, and hearken!

    Predetermine in time, I have sent my Son.
    He has made right all the wrongs, and wicked acts, you have done.
    You are to follow Him, and to listen to his voice;
    but once again, you are free to choose, I will not force your choice.

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    BROWNBEAUTY commented on Grieved in the spirit

    03-17-2009

    YOUR POEM REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART,BECAUSE AT 1 TIME MY HEART WAS COLD FROM THE 1 HE TOOK.
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    jickyjack commented on Grieved in the spirit

    03-02-2009

    Your biblical references are really great. Your message is very powerful.
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    crisanta commented on Grieved in the spirit

    02-27-2009

    hi, i love ur poetry. i can tell from reading it comes from God. God bless u, crisanta
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    kid221 commented on Grieved in the spirit

    02-09-2009

    That poem is so great and true.I'm glad to c that I am not the only one that writes bout God,maybe you'll read mine.I have a few more but everytime I get to the computer I 4get them but I will try to but more on.But I do love yours.God bless you as u
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    kcwhy commented on Grieved in the spirit

    01-29-2009

    for I too have had to go though the dream of putting my only son to rest, you feel my pain well written . thank you
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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