Grim

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  • Death

    Grim

    It never scares me.
    It is all around us.
    You all noticed it when it looks you in the face.

    Slowly people around us die.
    As death comes we wait for it.
    Wishing, hoping, wanting it happen to us also.

    We provoke death everyday.
    Telling our selves we shouldn't be here.
    Or it would be better off if we were dead.

    So sucide is not an answer to anything.
    Nor even homicide either.
    So look death in face and ask it would you like to die?

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    Vincent commented on Grim

    08-20-2009

    Sometimes when we love some one so much and they leave us way to soon, we just want to die, but we have to remember the ones that leave us would want us to be happy, healty, and to have a great life, I believe they are smiling down on us and wishing us the best. Smiles Vincent p,s, thanks for sharing your soul.

    forbiddenfruit

    08/20/2009

    Thank you so much your words are kind and calming right when needed most thanks :) :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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