gutter punk

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    gutter punk
    so me...yeah

    down in the gutter
    dove in the dumpster

    hit stems
    shared rigs
    dig?

    stole a little
    ...a alot
    velikoff rot gut shots

    bolt cut wheels for
    the dope man
    park po aint seen my beer can

    spanged change for 4 pack natty
    drank one and 3 to charity

    caught short wit assault and
    battery
    saturday
    in the park

    orange street lampglow never dark
    white noise and red
    and black too
    here comes 5-0 back thru
    noid man!
    relax boo
    they just drivin thru

    coocookachoo

    so yeah...
    you?

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    Hiporlacking commented on gutter punk

    07-17-2009

    I spent my reckless days rolling around with a bunch of punks. You hit the nail on the head here lady.
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    hippideeth commented on gutter punk

    07-01-2009

    This is pretty cool! I enjoyed it very much. YOur a fan of "THE BEAT" huh? ME too. keep writing. :)
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    Phatom commented on gutter punk

    06-05-2009

    I love your piece, it reads complete with a structure that is ultimately complete, wow, just enjoy reading your pieces coz you think outside the normal, and your imagery is stiffling serene and adds color to the theme, it's like a a tourist visiting your daily pencils jams, I TOTALY THINK IT IS WICKED
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    JadedJezzabel commented on gutter punk

    04-18-2009

    interesting and entertaining....kept my attention. gave it a 9
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    lightcourier commented on gutter punk

    03-18-2009

    Your love for beats shows. good stuff. excellent. Fun to read!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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