Haiku #1


  • Nature

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    My mentor helped me make this possible!!! Thanks ApaqRasgirl!!! This is my 1st Haiku!!! hope you enjoy!!!

    Haiku #1

    1)Cautiously Awaits     ---5 syllables ...I gave you an extra line for your first ones...grins
    2)In The Forests Of The Night
    3)Don't look at the light!!!
    Cautiously Awaits     
    In The Forests Of The Night
    Don't look at the light!!!

    by Brittkun and  ApaqRasgirl

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    angelchaser commented on Haiku #1


    I love haikus, Asha and I have written some together as well:)

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Haiku #1


    that is great dear, reminds me of aliens hiding in the forest to entrap you with the light.........great job.........how did you like doing them..did you have fun.......love asha........10++++



    yes I did have fun. I like a challenge. Aliens lol. I was not thinking about that but i dont remember lol

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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