Hallow Eve
Mesh wisps of tattered webs
Mist of ghost hair floating
Soaring over haunted branches
Rising up in a midnight mind
To forsaken village haunts
Till dawning light first appears
And Morning minds return
Hallow Eve
10 Comments
Tags: Dark Poetry
Mesh wisps of tattered webs
Mist of ghost hair floating
Soaring over haunted branches
Rising up in a midnight mind
To forsaken village haunts
Till dawning light first appears
And Morning minds return
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Poem Comments
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kpeery09 commented on Hallow Eve
12-18-2009
- very nice...makes me want to start singing This is Halloween by Danny Elfman
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kmooney commented on Hallow Eve
12-11-2009
- Short but wonderfully conceived. Great job. I love Halloween poems. Read mine Trick of Treat and Graveyards at Night. They might just raise some goosebumps.... Kevin
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knight4696 commented on Hallow Eve
12-10-2009
- Lucindaclaire - You are able to convey so much in so few words. Precise and concise! Very Nice! ... Ken
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Musicmynded1 commented on Hallow Eve
12-04-2009
- Another greeting card/book write (but only with the most of elegance of course).
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Pensil commented on Hallow Eve
10-14-2009
- This brief but focused poem brings out the halloween 'haunting' atmosphere most effectively.. A convincing mood setting makes it very good.
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