Happiness

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    again just some thoughts i wanted to put down.

    Happiness

    happiness is a place where joy abounds.
    a place where gray skies can't compound.
    a place where the sun shines through.
    everything is clear always new.

    Happiness can be found in a babies smile.
    or walking hand in hand with your love for a mile.
    it can be found in the joy of life,
    meeting a friend or having a wife.

    hapiness can be found in a moment of bliss.
    in that special moment your very first kiss.
    It can be found in a friendly hello.
    or in the sun just being mellow.

    Happiness can be found while the birds sing.
    it can be found in giving a ring.
    happines can be found in a helping hand.
    tilling the soil refreshing the land.

    happines dosen't come with the wind.
    it comes naturally, with the smiles of friends.
    happines dosen't, come with the night.
    it comes with love, spreading its light.

    Happiness is the place to be.
    a place where all are welcome and free.
    happiness is a place to love and desire.
    give all for happiness, fan the fire.

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    scrye commented on Happiness

    07-15-2009

    I really like the way your words flowed all the way through this. You took me on a journey to a majickal place, thank you for this

    UnworthyFather commented on Happiness

    07-06-2009

    Very nice, Daniel. You captured my attention and held it all the way through your poem. I really liked it, and the last two lines were killer! "Happiness is a place to love and desire - Give all for happiness, fan the fire!!" Great lines, Daniel. Thanks for sharing. 10 from me.

    RagusChaos commented on Happiness

    07-02-2009

    Cute chipper... I always figured happiness came from within and shown throughout... I thought happiness was a choice you had to make for yourself... not something that could happen to you.... Nah i'm just pulling at you so I have alot to say... LOL nice job

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