HARTBEAT

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    On average, a persons heart beats 70 times per minute. 4200 times in an hour.  and 100800 times in a day.I never would have figured this out on my own.  Once again, Thank God for google.  What did we ever do before google?

    HARTBEAT

    Feal my heartbeat,

     know it’s rhythm;

    count each pulse.

    When it races,you’ll know

     my love’s not false.

    Of the 4200 times it beats in an hours time,

    Know 4000 beats of those; are beats,

    You made my pulse climb.

    Just by being near me,

    You increase it’s rate.

    My heart  knows,

    You’re my true soul mate.

    You’re the only one,

    Who can make my heart beat,

    Faster and slower at the same time.

    For with you,

    I know everything will be fine.

    No words are needed to make my heart race.

    Simply your nearness can change it’s pace.

    With you around 

    I know I have nothing to fear,

    I can relax just knowing;

    you are near.

    You bring me peace,

    When I need release.

    Know not only my heart is yours,

    But my very soul.

    You filled a place in me,

    Where there was once a hole.

    Know each heartbeat pulses for you,

    For, I know your love to be true.

     

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    RJK commented on HARTBEAT

    01-14-2010

    It is a very special heart beat if it will last your qhole life threw. Nice way to put a very strong emotion

    Mextizo commented on HARTBEAT

    01-12-2010

    i can feel ur love. good sense in rhythm good stream of words

    knight4696 commented on HARTBEAT

    01-08-2010

    Angel ... This is a beautiful sentiment filled with strong emotion. Very nicely written. Ken

    frazel5 commented on HARTBEAT

    12-30-2009

    So lovely. The emotion is palpable in this. I can feel it dripping on every word. Great job! ~the fraz

    gogant commented on HARTBEAT

    12-27-2009

    When it is true love, one can feel it in their heart.......and with every beat there is a song. Very good am2............................g

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