HATE

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    HATE
    I hate this universe
    I hate this life's curse.
    the big bang of ignorance burst.
    I hate you and i hate me.
    dont try anymore just let me be.
    You wait for some clever words to feel important
    but you spew something ignorant
    to be! or to become!
    everyone run because here i come.
    I hate this life. living in strife.
    ill kill you with a surgical knife.
    I hate you and all things
    you have blood on your angel wings
    I hate me and i hate you
    I hate the things you do
    this world is over i am through
    I fucken hate you...........

    ................................Don Folks

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    kweenofcnfusion commented on HATE

    03-06-2009

    I think your work sounds more like lyrics, maybe you should try putting it to music.
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    NayInLove commented on HATE

    02-20-2009

    worthy of a 10
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    Phoenix9 commented on HATE

    02-20-2009

    good work, you can feel the hate
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    bforibus commented on HATE

    02-18-2009

    excellent poem for the moment at hand. post this in the room until it is read by every1
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    frgy25 commented on HATE

    02-09-2009

    Are you okay? It definitly sounds like something might be bothering you...
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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