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Written about my ex wife kidnapping our daughter and keeping us apart.



She took my daughter.

Stole her away in the night.

She robbed me.

That's never right.

I will never forget the words I spoke.

If you were here right now.

I would choke you to death.

Perform C.P.R. On you.

Then choke you to death again.

That she might greet death twice.

Fear it's hateful embrace.

His cold breath in her face.

Shudder at the fear of it again.

Defiling herself shamefully.

Emptying her bowels.

As all light left her eyes.

That is true hatred.

I despise myself for feeling that way.

Forgiveness is not natural.

To angry humans.

Our daughter will hate you as well.

For your tearing us apart.

You broke a sacred bond.

Not just a father's heart.

I forgive you.

Yet your righteous indignation sickens me.

You sit in judgment on the throne of shit.

Peering down on mortal men.

Pathetic woman....

Look within.

Phil G. Inman Sr. 2010

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Rhymer commented on Hatred


The anger emits line after line in this write.....enjoyed the the feeling you allowed me to digest. Excellent piece.



Thank you this was an emotionally exhausting piece.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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