HAVE YOU THOUGHT?

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TIS ONE LIFE. WILL SOON BE PAST.  ONLY WHAT'S DONE FOR
CHRIST WILL LAST
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HAVE YOU THOUGHT?

HAVE YOU THOUGHT????
 
Have you ever stopped to wonder what this life is all about? 
Why you're here and where you're going when your lease on time runs out? 

 Maybe you've been far too busy. Trying hard to reach your goal. 
Would you let me ask you kindley? Have you thought about your soul?

You may reach the highest portals. And your dreams may all come true.
 Wealth and fame may be your portion and success may shine on you.
 
All your friends may sing your praises. Not a care on you may roll.
What about that great tomorrow.... Have you thought about your soul? 
 
Don't forget your days are numbered, Thought you may be ridin high. 
 But like all of us poor mortals. Some day you'll just up and die! 

Your success and fame and glory won't  be worth the bell they toll. 
Let me ask you just one question. Have you thought about your soul? 

 If you've never thought it over,. Spend a little time today. 
 Their is nothing more important, That will ever come your way. 

Than the joy of sins forgiven.  And to know you've been made whole.
 In the name of Christ the Saviour. Have you thought about your soul? 

                             MAFLongfellow 05

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Lolee commented on HAVE YOU THOUGHT?

08-08-2009

This is a beautiful poem, fraught with well thought out meaning. Thanks for the question that this poem so eloquently asks. Thanks.

MAFLongfellow

08/09/2009

U R VERY WELCOME. HAVE A GREAT DAY IN THE LORD...MARILYN

HarverTomsson commented on HAVE YOU THOUGHT?

07-29-2009

If just one person has an altered destiny becasue of this poem, then your witness will have eternal significance.

MAFLongfellow

07/30/2009

YOU JUST MAKE MY DAY:) THANKS HARVER, U R SWEET, PTL POET FRIEND, MARILYN

ramblingrose commented on HAVE YOU THOUGHT?

07-29-2009

Very nice Marilyn. Unfortunately, too many in this world do not think about their eternal soul. The lie of the devil to Eve was that if she ate the forbidden fruit that she would be like God knowing good and evil. Mankind has been steeped in their own morality ever since and believe that the good that they do shall out weigh the bad and if there truly is a God that their morality will get them into heaven. This is contrary to the word of God that states that there is not a just man upon the earth that doeth good and sinneth not, there is none righteous, no not one. We are saved by Gods grace through faith and have the imputed righteousness of God because we are viewed to be under the blood of Christ so when the devil accuses us before God day and night, and rightfully so, God does not see us in our sins but under Christs blood. Our sins have been hidden in the small of his back and removed from where East meets West. How marvelous is that?! Great write!

MAFLongfellow

07/29/2009

GOD IS GOOD:o) GLAD U LIKED IT,THANKS FOR READING POET FRIEND, MARILYN

tierra7 commented on HAVE YOU THOUGHT?

07-29-2009

Marilyn, you are Amazin' , true...at times , we do get tooo comfortable and procrastinate...i i have been guilty of that...this can not be stressed any clearer.." Than the joy of sins forgiven. And to know you've been made whole. In the name of Christ the Saviour." God Bless you my friend, Terrie* (Tierra7)

MAFLongfellow

07/29/2009

THANKS TIERRA, U R SWEET.PTL,GLAD U LIKED IT,GOD'S BLESSINGS TO U, MARILYN

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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HAVE YOU THOUGHT???? 1
BEYOND THE VEIL 1
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HAPPY NEW YEAR! ~2010~ 0
THE CHOSEN ONE 0
CHRISTMAS MOURN 0
~AS WE GIVE THANKS TO GOD~ 1
MY BEWITCHING BROOM 3
COLUMBUS DAY U.S.A. 0
I LOVE MY DUCKY'S 0
HAPPY LABOR DAY! " LABOR OF LOVE" 1
REMEMBERING MOM 0
REMEMBERING ELVIS 0
OH PURPLE HEART 1
I SAW GOD TODAY 2
HAVE YOU THOUGHT? 4
BILLY M. 0
M.J. ~ R.I.P. 3
MOTHER MAY I? 0
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HEART BEAT'S 2
I AM ALIVE! 2
THIS DREAM TO YOU....MARTIN LUTHER KING JR. 0
OUR FREEDOM WASN'T FREE 1
THEIR SLEEP'S A STORM 0
BRAVE BENAZAR BHUTTO 0
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ELVIS 2
GRANDMA'S APRON 6
HAPPY NEW YEAR! 2009 0
POW OR MIA 1
MAY DAY! MAY DAY!~ 0
STAND UP AMERICA 4
THEIR SLEEP'S A STORM 0
JUST HOLD MY HAND 0
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MY AMERICAN HERO 3
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