Having you closed to me.

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    this small poem its dedicated to some one spaecialin my life....

    Having you closed to me.

           My dream is to have you always loving me......
           At my side supporting me,next to me at night
           holding me....
        
           Wanting me all the time;feeling the passion
          that cann't be out.....
          A feeling that grows as long we going out.....

          my dream is of having us like one;holding
         each other in the time we need.......
       
         Sharing moments together and our ways;
         our thoughts...
      
        learning from each,pleasing each other,loving
        caring,procting our love,our friendship and each
        other......


         Stay together like there's no tomorrow.as the
         moon and the stars are in heaven,it comes in
         the night.....
     
       our love is forever as long we want it ;as long
       we feel what we feel.......

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    spbsdude commented on Having you closed to me.

    09-29-2009

    To have a special someone is truly a gift, and you aptly portray that here. Nice job.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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