having you in my site

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THANKS TO EVERTONE OF YOU...STRAIGHT FROM MY HEART

having you in my site

SARA,TEMPY.CYNTHIAKEHL...
COTTONCANDY, MIEH..SHANNON AS WELL

BEAUTY ..WORDS OF WISDON
ALL FULL OF DREAMS
  OF STORIES NOT YET TOLD
BUSTING AT YOUR SEAMS

KING GEORGE KEEPS WRITING
WITH HELP FROM UP ABOVE
CONNS8'S SHAREING HER
UNDERSTANDING LOVE

TERRA ..RAYEN THEIR THOUGHTS
MADE ME SMILE
TENDERPOSIONS BRILLIANCE
  I REALLY LIKE HER STYLE

LIKE AH ROSEDECAYED IN AUTUUM
  WILL SOON BE BACK IN BLOOM
ANTIONETTEBAKER SHE'S 
 WAS THE LAST TO JOIN MY ROOM

AND THERE'S LAMISE,VIEJAY..LEEANNMARIE
  JUST LIKE ALL OTHER'S
HAS MEANT SO MUCH TO ME

NO ANGRY WORDS SPOKEN
  NEVER A REGRET
JADMELISA, THERE'CASTLEMIST EVERYWHERE
 TAKE MELISSA...WHO COULD FORGET?

LADYKING,SPAZMSG ONE THING STANDS TRUE
   JUST LIKE ALL THE REST "CHRISTLIKED" ME TOO

MY FIRST FRIEND MIRIAM..AS I WENT ON THROUGH
  THEN CAME ANOTHER ORIGINALMERLIN.. MADE IT TWO

AFTER LOOSEING HALF MY FAMILY
  ALL AT ONCED TWO FRIENDS JOINED THEM TOO
NOT KNOWING HOW ON THIS EARTH                                              I COULD MAKE IT THROUGH

DEPRESSION BEGAN FADDING
  WHILE READING ON THROUGH
ALL  YOUR THOUGHTS OF LOVE
  AND YOUR FRIENDSHIP TOO

IM NOT THE FIRST NOR WILL I BE THE LAST
  ALL KINDS OF TEADGADIES...JUST LOOK IN THE PAST

PLEASE LET ME MAKE IT VERY CLEAR.. 
  TO EVERYONE OF YOU
DEPRESSION CONSUMMED ME
  BUT I MADE IT THROUGH

FIRST OF ALL I THANK GOD
  WITH ALL THAT I AM
AND I THANK HIM VERY MUCH
  FOR FINDING....................... "EVERYONE OF YOU"!!!





 

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stefy commented on having you in my site

04-21-2010

So nice and kindly.........I like this poem very much.......................

Qualin

07/10/2010

THIS WAS DONE WHEN I FIRST BEGAN AND I MIGHT ADD IT WAS A CHALLENGE I DONT THINK I COULD DO IT AGAIN BUT I MAY TRY THIS WINTER...IF I GET SNOWED IN SOUNDS GOOD NOW WITH THE 100 PLUS TEMP'S...THANK YOU HONORED FRIEND...QUALIN

cynthiakehl commented on having you in my site

12-19-2009

WOW, i thank you my friend, you are a God send yourself. I can understand the inspiration our fellow poets share. grateful I am for them also :) I love your profile pic! kudos :*

Qualin

04/18/2010

YOU HAVE MADE ME FEEL SO MUCH BETTERAND I CERTIANLY HOPE GOD LIKES-UM...HE MUST HAVE A GREAT SENSE OF HUMOR AND LOVE OF POETRY DANIEL KNEW THIS HE SANG TO HIM AND WAS REWARDED WE CAN GIVE HIM PRAISE IN MANY WAYS LOVE IS THE GREATEST..THANK YOU MY FRIEND

laydbak1 commented on having you in my site

08-04-2009

Always a good thing, to give credit where credit is due....

connsk8 commented on having you in my site

08-03-2009

Wow, I am blessed and honored to have found you and to be included, thank you Qualin, and I'm so very glad if I was able to help, even in the smallest of ways, you have done us all proud, especially yourself!!!

Qualin

07/10/2010

DONT KNOW HOW I MESSED THIS COMMENT SCANNING TOO FAST I SUPPOSE..BUT THANK YOU FOR THE MANY COMMENTS AND INSPERATION...A TRUE FRIEND QUALIN

Tempy commented on having you in my site

08-01-2009

your so beautiful, i'm truly flattered and let me say it's been a blessing to meet you too

Qualin

07/10/2010

TEMPY YOUR A QUEEN..A JEWELL,A HEART WRITER, YOU HAVE INSPIRED ME AS MUCH AS ANYONE ON HERE AND IM TRULY THANKFUL TO HAVE YOU IN MY SITE...QUALIN

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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THE UNDISPUTED KING 8
CLOSED FOR REPAIR 16
The Squeeze Box Boy 16
PEPPIE SAYS HELLO 9
DON'T MESS WITH FAT LUCY 14
"CAN'T YOU JUST FEEL IT" 6
ON PREASTERS LAKE 25
IF YOU EVER SEE AN ELEPHANT!!!!! 15
DON'T FORGET THE MILK AND BREAD 4
OLE' MULESKINNERS.
...JACKASS
6
THE LORD OUR FRIEND...CHRI
ST JESUS
7
A LOVE THAT'S MEANT TO BE 7
THE DAY MY DADDY PRAYED 11
THE WIND SURLEY BLOWS 3
HERE ON "OLE GLORY" 4
A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND 14
having you in my site 5
PASSION OF THE MOMENT 6
MY MOST SPECIAL DAY 6
unconditional condition 8
ESOTERIC TEARS 7