HAWK WHO GOES THERE?

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    Poem Commentary

    We get lost within the reality of what is and what we want reality to be but with Faith in the works of God in troubling times we can handle any reality... Don't let depression take over your destiny to BE!!

    HAWK WHO GOES THERE?

     I am the darkness of
    shadows surf boarding through the tides
    of despondency and dejection
    I was an intrinsic nature
    now masked within my inner potential
    I hide amongst the blackness
    of my perspective of life
    drenched in the waves
    of a darkening perception
    I swim through the taunting memories  
    of what use to be me
    trapped within the pulpits of
    realities bitter truth
    I stumbled across the journey
    of God's plan for me to breathe
    in the uncertainties of my salvation
    Is it my destiny to dream inside
    this padded cell of illusion?
    I bleed in the agonies of my mind
    afraid of my true destiny...

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    sevyn7 commented on HAWK WHO GOES THERE?

    02-15-2012

    very powerful write, depression can bring us to dark places, but we must allow GOD's light to guide the way.
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    aliciagall

    02/15/2012

    Amen to that... Thank you!!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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