he did me father
i was an altered boyuntil the transformation was complete.
when my desiredness became
my desired bliss,
the priest turned to another younger soul
in need of saving from the beast.
ahh, men!
tyke
he did me father
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until the transformation was complete.
when my desiredness became
my desired bliss,
the priest turned to another younger soul
in need of saving from the beast.
ahh, men!
tyke
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knight4696 commented on he did me father
10-07-2009
- LOL! Tyke - I love the way you mask the humor in your poems. This one is hysterical!!! Great write!! Saved to faves!
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PamelaALamppa commented on he did me father
10-07-2009
- "when my desiredness became my desired bliss," These are telling lines - and truths. Many will be disturbed by this write, but I think you have spoken well - words that should be heard. Excellent. I look forward to reading more of your writes. ~Pamela
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