he dropped down

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    he dropped down

    his face went pale
    his eyes grew big
    this cant happen to him
    he really wants to live

    the doctor says he has cancer
    and gives him only a few years to live

    he dropps to his knees
    and crys God o God please save me
    he falls down on his face and screams
    God come save me

    he has to tell his family
    wife daughter and son
    they say it cant be true
    the doctor must be wrong
    this cant happen to you

    they drop to their knees
    and cry God o God please save him
    they fall down on their face and scream
    God come save him

    with his last few breaths
    he draws his family near
    he tells them
    God doesnt need him here
     
    he draws a breath in
    then he blows it out
    took one last look at his family
    closes his eyes
    and woke up in heaven

    he dropped down on his knees
    and worshiped the Lord God almighty
    he fell down on his face and said
    thank you for your amazing grace

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    nhorlandi commented on he dropped down

    02-04-2010

    This is sad but brave and courageous. Cancer is invincible disease but could be defeated when detected early. Well done!

    StefanieStammer

    02/05/2010

    thank you

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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