He whispered

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  • Confusion

    He whispered
    He whipered, come closer
    and I struggled
    He reached out, only to touch the
    invisable barrier I had built around my heart and soul.
    He walked away and I let him
    Never knowing that when I said goodbye
    what I relly ment was, please don't let me go....

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    JadedJezzabel commented on He whispered

    07-28-2009

    i'm guilty of the same thing.....the more i want to love someone the more i push them away......defensive dating i guess.....afraid to be hurt again. good poem
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    california commented on He whispered

    07-08-2009

    interesting poem, short, but nice. speaks to those feelings we have all had from time to time. or, does it speak about a mistake some of us have made... btw, I did not know that northern michigan ' was a location in the united kingdom.....
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    tap2face commented on He whispered

    01-02-2009

    did he return? Did he ever leave
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    Phoenix9 commented on He whispered

    12-29-2008

    if you let some one go, will they come back. very nicely done
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    ivecute77 commented on He whispered

    12-01-2008

    absolutley beautiful, short and sweet, I really liked this poem tugged on my heart strings for a sec. there.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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