( Heard ) They must of.......

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    ( Heard ) They must of.......




    Yes!
    No!
    Maybe,
    Who,
    Knows?


    Read, understand......
    Pay attention!
    Don't lose,
    Sight....




    Focus..... take it in...............
    Streach it out...
    Talk,
    No words....
    Silence.
    One...
    Two,
    Wispered,
    Hello's..............



    They must of heard!
    It all wrong......
    Cause when I wake.....
    Silence...
    Is still here....
    Singing it's....
    Lonly song!!!!

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    Marsink commented on ( Heard ) They must of.......

    01-11-2010

    Very well stated and original form: short and effective to present the ravages of lonliness.

    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    ty again Marsink...... for your comments they do mean so much to me.....

    MarionYost commented on ( Heard ) They must of.......

    01-10-2010

    Red, You never cease to amaze me.. great write! All the best -Marion-

    redbloodink

    01/31/2010

    I'm glad what ever you read of mine Marion touch you in the way the do.........

    calliope commented on ( Heard ) They must of.......

    01-09-2010

    I like the way you've taken this,the broken words and phrases emphasise the meaning all the more,Great job!

    redbloodink

    01/10/2010

    ty.... I try to make more out of just fewq words......

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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