Heart Of Thorns

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    Some people are lucky, but some people make the mistake of there life here on earth, such as loosing the love of your life, as in something you will never get back. For me its kind of to rewind time and do somethings diffrently.... But i will not discuss what my shame is.. it unbearable to say for me. i'm just hurting and wanted to write it down. but i thought it was a good one to share with others... So encase there is someone out their who's feeling some kind of shame, sadness, know your not alone... I may not talk to you but i sure will read your poems..... please comment if you like, on weather it was well written good inspiration, or just say that's me if you feel some of what i'm feeling. The inspiration is in the commentary it self.... That's all i want you to say, tell someone you love.. Like I told God... the thing is God already knows.. but its still good P.S Dyfriend

    Heart Of Thorns

    Look deep in to my eyes, their you will find

    My heart surrounded by a thicket of slashing thorns.

    Biting at my heart, but theirs no stopping it.

    For damage is already drifted,

    And the sin is to unbearable to a peal.

    Causing this shame, shame that runs deep.

    Hurting the ones i love,

    But you cant turn back time, theirs just forward,

    With the hidden truth to my shame.

    Never to be reveled.

    Yet i think they know it,

    And it just causes even more shame, and all the more pain.

    Talking to God, and getting it off my mind,

    Yet forevermore will I not be able to quench this

    Unspeakable shame...

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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